Louie - 2

posted September 27th, 2013, 12:21 pm

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September 27th, 2013, 12:44 pm



Hmm from the front I can now tell that's not the witch too bad she wasn't able to bring Chip back without erasing his memories she seems like less of a psycho than the other one...
One thing I always debate is if someone's memories are erased can you for sure say that's the same person?
I mean now Chip may be a completely different person from before or even may be that the original soul that ocupied the body moved on and that is a different Chip carying a different life on that same body...
I feel sorry for Louie he seems a bit more vulnerable right now, Chip means that much to him but in best case scenario he only has some charred remains of who his little brother was and nothing of the bond they had stayed in him after that resurection.Making the last pages of Chip's chapter look not surprising in a sad way.

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October 1st, 2013, 1:58 am

Wendy (Guest)



so i just stumbled across this and WOW!!
I love this story! I found this less than an hour ago and read from the beginning, so I wish i have more to read- but THIS IS GREAT so far!! (I love your style and everything. The characters, the dialogue.) Can't wait for more! ^^

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October 5th, 2013, 7:47 pm


It All Falls into Place


Ahhh! No wonder Chip said Louie was his older brother " kind of" & was kinda clueless about his own home dimension. You've been planning this from the very beginning, haven't you sneaky author!

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