Louie - 7

posted October 17th, 2013, 1:21 pm


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October 17th, 2013, 1:44 pm

Rakewn

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Sucks to suck

(feel free to correct any mistakes in that Italian btw)

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October 17th, 2013, 1:58 pm

egregiouslyTranquil

Translations.

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"È tutto colpa mia." means "It's all my fault." while "Mi dispiace moltissimo." means "I'm so sorry." Now for the speech bubbles: "Senza valore." means "Worthless.", "Che bene sei?" means "What good are you?", "Vai avanti! Lascia. Nessuno si cura." means "Go ahead! Leave. Nobody cares.", and "Tu non durerà molto a lungo." means "You will not last very long.".

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October 17th, 2013, 5:11 pm

Rinzler

Apologies in advance for the long-winded comment, haha

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I just want to say that I only just stumbled across this webcomic last night and I got so absorbed in it that I ended up reading all of it in one go! I checked back today and saw that it was updated, so I wanted to leave a comment saying how much I love it and appreciate the work y'all have put into it!

I originally came on smackjeeves because I've been looking for the webcomics I used to read when I was in high school (I'm in my undergrad in college now) for nostalgia's sake, but I came across this webcomic and got completely sucked into it!

I just love everything about it! All the character designs are so unique and interesting! And the backgrounds for each scene are all so wonderfully drawn and do such a perfect job of setting the mood for each scene! And the panel lay-out and composition of what goes into each panel and how to set it up is great, too! Nothing ever looks crammed or out of place!

And the art is so dynamic and vibrant with how well movement and facial expressions are expressed in each panel! And the writing is very engaging and flows at a very natural pace with all the characters having their own unique personalities and relating to each other very realistically! And I like how with the writing style, we are shown rather than told and have stuff revealed to us gradually rather than have everything spelled out for us from the very beginning.

Anyways, I apologize for how long-winded that was, but I just really have been enjoying this webcomic and wanted to put into words everything that I like about it to thank the people responsible for it! c: I look forward to seeing how Skeptical develops in the days to come!

Also, man, I feel so sorry for Louie now! D: I know he's done some terrible things and obviously isn't a very good person, but he honestly does love his little brother and was trying to take care of him. He just ended up going down the wrong path and going about things the wrong way and I think he really regrets that now.

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October 17th, 2013, 7:35 pm

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@Rinzler: Oh gosh, no need to apologize for long-winded comments! We love every comment and we love them too. Its always very motivating to see that someone enjoyed the comic enough to write anything, let alone something as long as this!

So thank you so much for all of your kind words! It really means a lot to both of us.

((and im glad to know that someone out there likes the backgrounds and composition because those are the things I worry about the most hahahgahggh))

Thanks again, and we hope you enjoy where the story goes!

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October 18th, 2013, 11:29 am

M-24

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Poor Louie is riddled with guilt. ;____;
I don't like this at all, feels like something bad is going to happen. I wish Chip would at least visit him once (and Louie would try to tell him how he feels).

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October 18th, 2013, 12:44 pm

Luna (Guest)

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Ciao! I love your comic!
I have just a couple of fixes for the Italian:"che bene sei?" it's "in cosa sei buono?", "Tu non durerà molto a lungo." it's "Non durerai molto a lungo." and "è tutto colpa mia." it's "è tutta colpa mia."
Thank you for this amazing story!
Baci (kisses)

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October 18th, 2013, 1:56 pm

Rakewn

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@Luna: Fixed those now! Thank you so much!! <3

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October 18th, 2013, 2:50 pm

EnniBee

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Hello! I really love your comic, it's very deep (:
I look foward to the update! :D
I wanted to say that "Vai avanti! Lascia. Nessuno si cura." should be fixed with "Vai avanti! Vattene. Non importa a nessuno." (:
(I'm italian)
bye :3

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October 18th, 2013, 3:42 pm

Rakewn

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@EnniBee: Thank you very much!! Fixed that one too. uvu

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October 20th, 2013, 12:48 am

Koori

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LOUIIIIIE -Sobs heavily-
I wish I could hate you again, Louie, so this page doesn't hurt my heart so much. 8'c

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October 20th, 2013, 10:09 am

EnniBee

:3

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@Rakewn: you're welcome c:

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January 21st, 2014, 5:08 pm

Roxxie

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It's all so incredibly perfect.
The pain, the body language, the jumbled thoughts... perfect. :'(

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May 29th, 2014, 9:22 am

Pandapal

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Aww, Louie :( I just wanna give him a hug. Well, assuming he wouldn't try to eat me :/

I just found this comic yesterday and omg is it wonderful! I can't stop reading!

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December 6th, 2015, 12:10 pm

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orange= orange skull person..?
Gunther yelling about someone dying....
Slon.
Italian...

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June 29th, 2017, 10:20 am

GayerThanARainbow

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Seeing this,i feel so sorry for Louie. :/

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