Chest Cavity (Gore Warning)

posted March 27th, 2015, 1:06 am


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March 27th, 2015, 1:09 am

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Two kids discover a body; two grown dudes discover a body; Izzy discovers a forum full of n00bs

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March 27th, 2015, 9:53 am

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Her disdain is palpable XD

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March 27th, 2015, 12:04 pm

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I'm guessing the chest cavity victims are Skull People now?

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March 27th, 2015, 10:55 pm

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I feel like I just stepped into the twilight zone. Very cool... and a bit creepy. Looking forward to finding out more. :)

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March 27th, 2015, 11:19 pm

Izu-chan (Guest)

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I just found your webcomic today, binge-read it in two hours because I had no school and nothing to do today =3= I've got a couple things to say (a couple topics with loaded information ;3; ).

1. This....Story....Is....ADORABLE ;A; There's JUST the right amount of action, friendship, bullshit, supernatural normativity, and cuteness packed all in one story. Consider me hooked :>

2. (I am only saying this because the synopsis bit said you were appreciative of constructive criticism):
As much as I love this story and find it very easy to get attached to (which I am attached to already), I can't shake the feeling that the progression is a little too fast. The action part can be overlooked--especially since I adore spontaneity in mundane everyday life--but when I look at Chip and Ellis' relationship with each other, it seems like their feelings were a bit rushed, which kinda stems from the fact that it's not really clear where, when, and how Ellis developed a crush on Chip (same with Chip). I mean, in the first chapter (or at least right after the story began), Ellis seemed to already be attached to Chip in such a manner even though he'd only known Chip for a few days, probably only two. They hadn't known each other for long, yet they're already embracing with such (easy to misread) longing/emotion when Chip's about to leave him. The rest of the comic is still superb, and I love this art, but I'm still a bit dubious about their relationship blooming at such a fast pace.

Well, it's already at this stage, however, so I'm not sure what else can be done about it (not sure if I even want anything done now, for the sake of the story retaining its frikin adorable/hilarious/action-packed personality it already has. So, to conclude my point, you're doing amazing, and I can't wait for the next page :3

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April 10th, 2015, 2:45 am

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@Izu-chan: thank you so much!! i completely get what you mean by it being too fast, because looking back on it it does definitely feel that way. the fast pace probably came about from the fact that there's so much we wanted to get to that the beginning parts and multiple bits in between were definitely rushed, which we really should have taken our time on considering how important that development was! we really appreciate your critique and though nothing can be changed about those parts now, we will most definitely keep it in mind and take more time with future character arcs+relationship developments. (:

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April 10th, 2015, 2:11 pm

Mohimi

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Dude, what if that chest cavity victim is Chip's older brother? Or when humans are killed in the same way and they are brought back to life, their core would be where they've been socked?

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